Flashbacks

10-03-08

Now here is a strip that I really like up until the last panel. I think it would have been stronger if I just ended it with Terry's confused and disbelieving look instead of trying to bring everything together into another gag.

One of the struggles, I guess, is trying to write a comic where the humor is all over the place instead of JUST at the end of the strip. Yet there's always that temptation to deliver the final blow. Instead, here, what would have been a crescendo of humor, of one thing building off of the next, is ruined by a weak finale.

Should've just ended with Terry's expression.